this entry is for the sunday photo fiction. a weekly writing challenge where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using around 200 words.
my entry:
“Why can’t we be like them?” Don lifted his head to see the doves. “All we do is fight.” Ashley continued. “I work all the day in that house and when you come you start criticizing.”
“What about you?” Don jumped from the sofa. “The moment I set foot in this place you start nagging. How unlucky you are for marrying a man with a low paid job.”
“Did I lie?” She shouted.
“You knew that when we met. You knew that I’m not ready to change.” Putting his hand in his hips.
“Because you are coward.” She gazed at him.
“That is it I’m done.” He grabbed his jacket.
“Yeah run like always.” Following him with her eyes.
He slammed the door the scared doves flight away. The woman, putting her hand in the edge of the sink, started to cry. A warm feeling enveloped her, she took the two arms into her hands. “I’m sorry.” A soft voice whispered in her ears.
“Me too darling.” she turned. “I promise I will not….”
“Shuuuuuuu ….. I love the way you are.” He continued.
“Don’t change your job for me, I love you.” She hugged him tightly.
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word count 196
thank you for reading.
Good to get things in the open…and finish with a happy ending.😃
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thank you yes sometimes all we need is honesty
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Awww, sometimes, it takes little instances like the sight of the doves to show us what truly matters
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yeah, sometimes even the little things can clarify for us the road thank you for reading
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I enjoyed this, and nice piece of work with a nice happy ending. Well done.
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thank you nice to hear from you 🙂
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I can be soppy and like happy endings. Well done.
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thank you i like happy endings too
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Good tale.
Tiny typo, I am sure you meant woman, not women, at the sink.
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oops sorry 🙂
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fixed thank you
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Lovely story! So happy for them that they realized how much they love each other!
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thank you i think anger can make us blind but when we calm down we see the truth.
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That is the truth!
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I almost feel like saying: “…and the doves came back again…”
Lovely story!
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thank you for reading
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Great story 🙂 And love always gets there in the end.
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thank you 🙂 i do think that too
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That is why, honesty is the best policy. Very warming story.
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thank you for reading. you are absolutely right always speak from your heart 🙂
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You’re welcome, and the logical decision at that present time should be made.
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🙂
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